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Stacy🍀's avatar

Yesss, you did justice to the song🙌😌. I think I'd like to see something tragic maybe on loss and heartbreak or even murder 😂.

Chineme's avatar

Idea, the one I have planned for Wednesday (that I haven't written) is very melancholy though

Sade L's avatar

I need to express how I feel with voice note. Substack take note.

Had a smile on my face for the first part and started wondering if this could be me but I realized that nobody can catch me outside. *Sign*

What you did there almost got you murdered Sha, because how did she just disappear without him trying to keep in touch. Thank God for patience 😂

Love it my wife❤️

Chineme's avatar

Thank you babygirllll ❤️❤️😘

angel's avatar

honestly

you did this justiceee.

the vibe of the song matched the scenarios

and how he fumbled the number twice and then she texted him was amazingggg

youre like super talented tooooooo

Chineme's avatar

Thank yewwwwwwwwww

I'm blushingggggggggg

MUBARAK's avatar

To find this kind of love story in Lagos is by connection tbh. Every man needs an Onyi in his life. Scratch that, I need an Onyi in my life😪

Chineme's avatar

😂😂😂

Xi's avatar

Your Flowers!!! 🌹🌹🌹

Folaju's avatar

This is my favorite thing you've written so far

an_imaginative_thing's avatar

I'm now crushing on these stories. But seriously though: that dialogue— it's to learn work from you now

Bettyy's avatar

I really enjoyed this read. Had me grinning all through. Also I read this while May 10th was playing. Tew good!!❤️

Chineme's avatar

Thank you so much ❤️

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May 12, 2025
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Chineme's avatar

Romance is my favourite genre for a reason